This guide assumes you already know what an RRL is. Here is how to write one, from a blank Chapter 2 to a finished synthesis.
Step 1: Get your school's Chapter 2 format
The manuals this guide draws on show two patterns. Find out which one your research manual requires.
Pattern A: by source type and origin. This is the format in the Emilio Aguinaldo College thesis manual.
- Review of Related Literature
- Foreign Literature
- Local Literature
- Review of Related Studies
- Foreign Studies
- Local Studies
- Synthesis
Pattern B: thematic. The PUP thesis manual requires the review to be organized by theme, with a synthesis at the end.
- Introductory paragraph
- Theme 1 (often your independent variable)
- Theme 2 (often your dependent variable)
- Theme 3 (the relationship between them, or the setting)
- Synthesis of the Reviewed Literature and Studies
Also note three rules from your manual: the minimum number of sources, the allowed age of sources, and the citation style. PUP, for instance, asks for at least 20 works for an undergraduate thesis and applies a ten-year window except for classical theories.
Step 2: Turn your title into search terms
Take a sample title:
Smartphone Use at Bedtime and Sleep Quality Among Grade 12 Students in a Public Senior High School in Quezon City
Pull out the parts:
| Part | From the title | Search terms |
|---|---|---|
| Independent variable | Smartphone use at bedtime | "bedtime smartphone use", "screen time before sleep", "mobile phone use at night" |
| Dependent variable | Sleep quality | "sleep quality", "sleep duration", "Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index" |
| Population | Grade 12 students | adolescents, "senior high school students", "high school students" |
| Setting | Quezon City, Philippines | Philippines, Filipino, "Metro Manila" |
Combine them with AND and OR. A first search might be ("smartphone use" OR "screen time") AND "sleep quality" AND adolescents. For local studies, add AND (Philippines OR Filipino). Where to run these searches is covered in where to find sources for your RRL.
Step 3: Log every source in a matrix
Before writing a single paragraph, record each source in a table. This is the step that makes synthesis possible. The rows below use four real, published studies, described from their abstracts. Full references are at the end of this guide so you can check each one.
| Author and year | Type | Origin | Method and sample | Key finding | Theme | Relation to my study |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Carter et al. (2016) | Study (systematic review and meta-analysis) | Foreign | 20 cross-sectional studies, 125,198 children | Bedtime media device use associated with inadequate sleep quantity, poor sleep quality and excessive daytime sleepiness | Device use and sleep | Same two variables; pooled foreign evidence |
| Hysing et al. (2015) | Study | Foreign | Cross-sectional survey, 9,846 adolescents aged 16 to 19, Hordaland County, Norway | Daytime and bedtime device use related to short sleep duration and long sleep onset latency | Device use and sleep | Same age group as Grade 12; self-reported sleep |
| Chang et al. (2015) | Study (experiment) | Foreign | Adults read a light-emitting e-book or a printed book before bedtime | E-book reading suppressed melatonin, delayed the circadian clock and lengthened time to fall asleep | Mechanism | Basis for the framework; participants were adults, not adolescents |
| Buctot et al. (2020) | Study | Local | Online survey, 1,447 Filipino junior and senior high school students | 62.6% met the study's criterion for smartphone addiction; smartphone addiction negatively correlated with health-related quality of life | Smartphone use among Filipino adolescents | Same population; outcome is quality of life, not sleep |
Fill in "Relation to my study" for every row. If you cannot, the source probably does not belong in your RRL.
Step 4: Group the sources by theme
Sort the matrix by the Theme column. For the sample title, themes might be: how much adolescents use phones, how screen light affects sleep, and what studies say about the link between device use and sleep. In Pattern B these themes become your headings. In Pattern A they become the order of paragraphs inside each foreign or local subsection.
Step 5: Draft each section by comparing sources
A paragraph that reports one source at a time reads like a list of book reports. The Emilio Aguinaldo College manual calls this a "he said, she said" enumeration of summaries.
Weak:
Carter et al. (2016) reviewed 20 studies and found that device use affects sleep. Hysing et al. (2015) surveyed adolescents in Norway and found that device use affects sleep. Chang et al. (2015) ran an experiment and found that e-book reading affects sleep.
Better:
Bedtime use of electronic devices has been consistently associated with shorter and poorer sleep in young people. A meta-analysis of 20 cross-sectional studies linked it to inadequate sleep quantity, poor sleep quality and daytime sleepiness (Carter et al., 2016), and a survey of 9,846 Norwegian adolescents found the same pattern for sleep duration and sleep onset latency (Hysing et al., 2015). Experimental work suggests one mechanism: reading from a light-emitting screen before bed suppressed melatonin and delayed the circadian clock in adults (Chang et al., 2015). The observational evidence is cross-sectional and the sleep measures in Hysing et al. were self-reported, so the direction of the relationship remains open.
The second version makes a claim about the literature as a whole, groups the citations, and ends by pointing at a limitation. That limitation becomes part of your gap.
Useful sentence patterns:
- Agreement: "Several studies have reported that ... (A, 2021; B, 2023)."
- Contrast: "In contrast to A (2021), B (2023) found ..., possibly because ..."
- Limitation: "These findings are based on ..., which limits ..."
- Link to your study: "The present study addresses this by ..."
Step 6: Write the synthesis
The synthesis is the last section of Chapter 2 and the one panels read most closely. Answer four questions: what the sources agree on, where they differ, what is missing, and how your study responds.
Synthesis
The reviewed studies agree that bedtime use of electronic devices is associated with shorter and poorer sleep among children and adolescents (Carter et al., 2016; Hysing et al., 2015), and experimental work with adults points to melatonin suppression and circadian delay as one likely mechanism (Chang et al., 2015).
The studies differ in design and measurement. The observational evidence is cross-sectional, and the Norwegian survey relied on self-reported sleep, while the mechanism was tested experimentally in adults.
The one Philippine study reviewed here surveyed 1,447 junior and senior high school students and examined smartphone addiction in relation to health-related quality of life (Buctot et al., 2020). It did not measure sleep.
The present study therefore examines bedtime smartphone use and sleep quality among Grade 12 students in a public senior high school in Quezon City, using the Pittsburgh Sleep Quality Index so that results can be compared with foreign findings.
This example rests on four sources so that you can check every statement in it. A real synthesis covers every source in your chapter, and a statement such as "no local study has measured sleep" is only defensible if your search record shows where you looked.
Step 7: Cite and check
- Use the style your manual requires. For most Philippine programs that is APA 7th edition.
- Every in-text citation needs a reference list entry, and every entry needs an in-text citation.
- List grouped citations alphabetically inside the parentheses, separated by semicolons.
- For an unpublished local thesis, see how to cite a dissertation or thesis.
- Apply your manual's recency rule. Flag older sources and be ready to justify them.
- Reread your paraphrases against the originals to make sure the wording is your own.
RRL checklist before you submit
- Chapter 2 headings match the school manual.
- Minimum number of sources met, within the allowed years.
- Foreign and local sources are both present if required.
- Each paragraph compares at least two sources or explains why one source matters.
- The synthesis states a gap and links it to your study.
- In-text citations and reference list match.
- No source appears that you have not opened and read.
References
- Polytechnic University of the Philippines. (2017). University thesis and dissertation manual. ISBN 978-971-95208-8-7. https://www.slideshare.net/slideshow/pupuniversitythesisanddissertationmanualwithisbnasof080717pdf/251450946
- Emilio Aguinaldo College, Research and Development Office. (n.d.). Manual on thesis writing (A.Y. 2017–2018 edition). https://eac.edu.ph/wp-content/uploads/2021/05/EACC-RDO-Manual_on-Thesis-Writing.pdf
- American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American Psychological Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000
- American Psychological Association. (n.d.). Verb tense. APA Style. https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/grammar/verb-tense
Studies used in the worked example:
- Buctot, D. B., Kim, N., & Kim, J. J. (2020). Factors associated with smartphone addiction prevalence and its predictive capacity for health-related quality of life among Filipino adolescents. Children and Youth Services Review, 110, Article 104758. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.childyouth.2020.104758
- Carter, B., Rees, P., Hale, L., Bhattacharjee, D., & Paradkar, M. S. (2016). Association between portable screen-based media device access or use and sleep outcomes: A systematic review and meta-analysis. JAMA Pediatrics, 170(12), 1202–1208. https://doi.org/10.1001/jamapediatrics.2016.2341
- Chang, A.-M., Aeschbach, D., Duffy, J. F., & Czeisler, C. A. (2015). Evening use of light-emitting eReaders negatively affects sleep, circadian timing, and next-morning alertness. Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences, 112(4), 1232–1237. https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.1418490112
- Hysing, M., Pallesen, S., Stormark, K. M., Jakobsen, R., Lundervold, A. J., & Sivertsen, B. (2015). Sleep and use of electronic devices in adolescence: Results from a large population-based study. BMJ Open, 5(1), Article e006748. https://doi.org/10.1136/bmjopen-2014-006748
